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Sirens.

The police search the area,
The dogs baying
And men yelling.

The civilians stand
Under the cherry blossoms
And sunshine.
Waiting for the signal
That all is safe again.

The people are one creature:
All the same size
All the same clothes.
No movement
Except whispers.
Lips humming.
Hiding their accusations;
Leaving them in the open.

Who?
Who did it?
Who killed the King?

Her red hair waves
As she watches them.
Her sword sits on her hip
Matching the color of her hair
And hands

High among the cherry blossoms
She sits,
Avoiding the policemen
And dogs
And shouting men.

Her eyes shine.
It is the first time she has seen
The civilians questioning,
Thinking,
Living.

The Keeper sits on high
Looking down
And laughing at the herd
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Author's Comments

This was an assignment for my Creative Writing class.

Um... :lmao: Yeah. I don't have much to say on it. Ni!

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:iconkairi-angel:
Shana? D:

Some of the parts like the beginning sound like you're just hitting enter on a paragraph rather than flowing lines together. .-. good all the same, Dori.

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:lmao:

...yeeeah, Shana was getting to my head a little bit.

I didn't realize I was thinking about her 'til halfway through the poem. .-.

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I'm too cool for a signature, so there. Nyah!

...wait a minute...
:iconprofessionalpest:
Well, you've already heard what I think of this. I really love your writing, Door, an awful lot. You should make this into a full story, it'd be cool. Though whatever you write, it'd be cool. :)

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Come on now. Is that anyway to talk to your new boss, landlord, and all-around overseer?
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Lol, yeah, I know you'd like to see this in full story form. I don't really have much of a plot though, just a brief sort of snapshot. Maybe if I had more of an actual plot figured out... :lmao:

Thank you. :hug: You're so sweet.

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I'm too cool for a signature, so there. Nyah!

...wait a minute...
:iconprofessionalpest:
Actual plot, you say? hm... I might be able to help out there...

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Come on now. Is that anyway to talk to your new boss, landlord, and all-around overseer?

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